WALT: use punctuation correctly and write in the first person.
I just arrived at my favourite swimming pool. I got changed into my swimming togs and off I went. I jumped in and splashed everyone in the pool. I saw the magnificent hydro slide so I jumped on it straight away and got a doughnut and a jumped up the stairs! I finally got up and the green light appeared and I sprinted down! I saw the bowl it turned me backwards! I sped for the end! After I got changed into my clothes and went home. I just remembered that I had the best day ever and then I had a rest at home!
