In Room 4 we are learning how to write in first person.
I was lurking through the woods and if anything wanted to attack me I knew I was the largest cat in the world. I was looking for some food... but wait, something was lurking through the woods. It was a deer so I slowly walked around the deer and then I jumped on it while it was looking another direction. I ate it because I am a carnivore. So after that feast I swam home because I was a good swimmer so I would not sink down to the bottom of the lake. Then I yawned but it turned into a roar. My friend birdie came flying towards me and said ‘I heard your raw, it was over three kilometres away!’
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ReplyDeleteWow Kyan I love what you did with the story. You put lots of facts in there your pretty good at writing. What is your favourite big cat?
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Hi Kyan
ReplyDeleteI love your first fact it is so cool. You know all of this facts.
Could you tell me what your favourite big cat is?
Thank you.
Jai.