W.A.L.T Write a brief recount
On Monday my school walked to the red zone and we had to go to each level.So the first level was rice it was hot.The second level was making huts it was hard but it was fun .Level three crossing a field blindfolded it was scary because I ran in to a bush. The last level the hardest level which was the border. We had a buddy and it was the most hard level so we had to find out words in different languages and try to translate. Then we went back to school, I wouldnt want to be a refugee, its not fun.
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday 14 May 2021
Recount refugee walk
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Well done at writing a detailed description of the refugee walk. I like your honesty about not wanting to be a refugee and this will make u appreciate what you do have in your life more Mum xx 😁
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